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Private Marseille! (When in doubt, apologize first!)
Okay, let's get down to business. My intention was to make this understandable even for people who haven't seen the original plot of the film, so I wrote it in a way that's easy for everyone to understand. (Because the pain of not understanding many characters in my own reviews is just too much!)
I never imagined Obito's storyline would be this long! (Private Marseille!)
(Especially since a lot of Naruto's plot is set in flashbacks, and I couldn't find the specific episode numbers online, I really had to watch it bit by bit myself! So touching!)
Starting from chapter 74 (around the time of my debut?), after reading the reviews, I gradually reduced the amount of trivial details (facepalm). It feels a bit late.
These past few days have mostly been filled with negative reviews, emmm, and this isn't something an apology can solve. Because this inexperienced writer lacks experience, there are two things that are particularly difficult to overcome. (Let me offer some explanation to you readers.)
1. I, a complete failure, can't just change all the previous plot points; if I did, the book would be ruined! Seriously! Making a lot of changes to the chapters would cause the plot to become inconsistent, which would be too discouraging! The consequence of shortening the plot is that the system's detection of the chapters I posted that day will directly reduce my word count.
(For example, if I change chapter 90 to chapter 60, the extra 30 chapters will be lost, and the system will automatically reset the word count for that day to zero!)
2. Since I've already written half of Obito's story, I can't suddenly change my writing style and gloss over all the plot points, can I? (crying) (I really didn't expect Obito's story to be over 400 minutes long! Milon's was only 60-odd minutes!)
(Okay, that concludes the two points.)
II. Future Writing Style
This writer promises to try my best (very quietly) to extract the essence from future plot developments! (After all, my writing skills are limited~)
However, this is a movie review, not a list or ranking (just a weak explanation).
If I write about highlights, like only mentioning Obito giving Kakashi the Sharingan, nobody knows what kind of person Obito is, so how are the characters from all realms supposed to comment on him?! (Cracks!)
If we're going to make a list, things like Guy's "Your Grandma Knocks on the Door" or Kaneki Ken's "darkening" are examples of plots with strong emotional or power outbursts in a short period of time (there have been too many of these already).
III. Who should we write about next?
I've carefully reviewed all the storylines that you readers wanted to see several times, and then selected the ones I could write. (Selection from my limited brain capacity.)
(Most domestic comics and novels are banned; they get banned as soon as I write one (I really can't do anything about it! I've already behaved myself, please have mercy))
And then there are characters like Otto from Honkai Impact 3rd that I really haven't seen. It's definitely my problem, private Marseille!
Originally, I, a complete idiot, wanted to write a redemption trilogy.
Milon (looking back before making a mistake)
Obito (turning back after making a mistake)
And there's Arthur the Clown (who never looks back).
But because there were so many negative reviews, this nobody's heart sank (shattered).
However, seeing hundreds of requests for updates every day still spurred me on to keep writing. After all, this struggling writer was prepared to play it alone until the end.
So, I'm truly grateful to every reader who has read this terrible book!
(Okay, back to the main topic)
What I'm most certain I'll write at the moment
Deception, Wisdom: Ironclad, Gold Sand, Genshin Impact, Fryna
Darkening, Transformation: DC, Arthur the Clown, Tokyo Ghoul, Ken Kaneki (from the beginning to the end of his first darkening) (tentative)
Emotions, Beliefs: Playing with Life, Schuberic
Perseverance, Hope: Ultraman Nexus, Jun Himeya (tentative), Ultraman Tiga (Daigo fights Gatanothor in the end).
Action-packed: Jujutsu Kaisen, Gojo Satoru (if any, it should be the same as the list, only looking at the most intense moments) (tentative), One Piece, Marineford War, Demon Slayer, Yoriichi Tsugikuni
I've also thought about other titles like Iron Man, Super Beast Force, Constantine, and Re:Zero -Starting Life in Another World- (tyrannical) (if that book survives until then).
And then there's The Three-Body Problem, that's way too highbrow (facepalm). I definitely can't handle it right now.
The ones I can confirm are mostly stories that aren't particularly long (writing about Obito was too long and the reviews were all bad, so the length was cut in half! Half! (sob sob) I don't even know if it will drop further).
There are also some other ones that I, a complete idiot, didn't not understand, I just genuinely had never seen before! Private Marseille!
A similar world setting will inevitably be affected by the combat power. For example, if I, a nobody, wrote something like Star Journey or Naruto, and then went on to write something like Ye Xiu or Ye Shen in a normal world... emmm, it's hard to say. The same goes for Jin Tieshou. I didn't think that much before writing about Mi Long; I just liked Mi Long and started writing (my fault!).
(Of course, this is just my opinion, and you are welcome to correct me if you don't mind.)
(If there's anything else I haven't considered, feel free to leave a message here, and I'll reply to each one!)
Finally~ if this reader is satisfied, could you please give it a rating? (Shameless!) (Because the rating is really too low, a blanket cutoff! Although I don't know if that's the reason)
Of course, I'll take negative reviews seriously too (crying).
By the way, who should I write about next? Obito's story only has two or three days left! Can the clown accept that? (90 minutes of plot)
Chapter 92 The Shattering of the Sword of the Heart, The Future of Becoming Hokage!
"Powerful! Too powerful!" In the Battle Through the Heavens world, Xiao Yan exclaimed excitedly. Whether it was the range of attacks, the intensity, the speed, the combat skills, or the awareness, he would surely die if he faced such an opponent!
"Since the other party was able to become the Ten-Tails Jinchuriki and undergo a complete transformation, could I become stronger through a similar method?" Xiao Huohuo pondered. Although he had already mastered the Twin Fire Fusion Technique and named it 'Buddha's Wrath Lotus,' who would complain about having too many trump cards?
"Appearance...armor...armor!" In the Marvel universe, Tony Stark's eyes lit up as he spoke.
"Jarvis, create a folder for me called 'Super Armor'!"
"Okay, sir."
"Not bad, not bad. It's the same as our Wang family's Spirit Binding and Commanding technique. Both involve devouring the weak to strengthen themselves. It seems our Wang family is indeed the strongest!" - Under One Person World, Wang Bing.
"It's truly astonishing that an individual's will could overcome monstrous beasts." In the world of Genshin Impact, Yun Jin pondered whether it was possible to adapt Obito's unwavering commitment to love into a drama.
"The immense power has ignited within me!" Genshin Impact world, Tartaglia.
"You no longer need to fear death and endure hardship; you can go to the world of dreams."
[Obito floated in the air, still attacking the remaining Allied Shinobi Forces!]
Faced with such a terrifying disparity in strength, most of the ninjas have already been persuaded. For these ordinary ninjas, is the real world truly worth staying in?
Even the words of Hashirama Senju, the God of Shinobi, seemed utterly powerless at this moment.
This time, even Naruto shed tears, looking at Obito with resentment in his eyes, unable to utter a word.
[He was also entangled by the branches conjured by the Ten-Tails, almost losing all his chakra. If it weren't for the Second and Third Hokage's rescue, he would probably be a withered corpse by now.]
The giant vine began to writhe again, and almost everyone gave up. But then, Sasuke activated his Susanoo and severed it in one fell swoop!
Seeing his comrades' figures, Naruto regained his fighting spirit and, with Kurama's help, once again entered Sage Mode.
This time, he also opened his heart to everyone without reservation, hoping that everyone would not give up!
[He was isolated from a young age because he was treated as a fox demon, and even his only fellow human, Sasuke, looked down on him.]
After finally gaining his approval, the other person left him again! He's always alone.
(No, Swallow! How can I live without you!)
[His only caring grandfather, the third generation, died; the perverted sage who guided his training died; his teacher Asuma, who taught him Wind Release, died; one important person after another passed away; even Neji, whom he had promised to change to protect him, died in his arms.]
He had promised not to harm his companions, but the sight of the sacred tree laden with corpses was a resounding slap in the face!
Seeing Naruto's experiences and feeling the hardships he had endured, Hashirama released his own memories, demonstrating his desire and determination for peace, which reignited everyone's fighting spirit!
Minato transferred the power of the Nine-Tails to Naruto, and Sasuke, with Jugo's help, also activated Sage Mode Susanoo.
However, their attacks were a joke in the face of the Six Paths' power; with a mere wave of his hand, he blocked the opponent's Tailed Beast Ball and Black Flame Arrow with a Truth-Seeking Ball.
"It's time for bed. I'll take you to the world of dreams."
[Obito used the Truth-Seeking Balls to conjure the Spear of the Ama-no-Mago, easily slamming the two to the ground and even shattering their weapons.]
Seeing Naruto stand up again, Obito was deeply moved. No matter the situation, he never gave up; no matter what happened, his heart was always filled with love!
This kind of thing!
This kind of person!
Does it really exist?
[Obito desperately wanted to know the answer, the answer he had asked himself countless times but could never find!]
"Like me, the accumulated pain will one day change you."
[Obito kept trying to persuade Naruto to bear greater pain, the betrayal of his comrades, the future war, and even the enormous gap in strength right now!]
"Why are you willing to fight at all costs?!"
Naruto remained steadfast, slowly rising to his feet and speaking firmly.
"Because this is my own ninja way!"
"I always keep my word! That's my ninja way!"
"Naruto, just like Obito before him, sticks to his beliefs and never abandons his comrades!" Xia Ling, in the world of Zhenhun Street.
"The difference between him and Obito is that Obito collapsed under the pressure of despair, while he persevered." —Wang Lu, from the world of Once Upon a Time in a Spirit Sword Mountain.
"Are there really people who are full of hope at such moments? Although I felt very excited after entering the martial world, now I feel more and more that my strength is a burden." Lei Wujie, a young man traveling the world.
"Obito has wavered, hasn't he? Naruto has repeatedly proven to him the existence of hope, even in the things that once disappointed him." —Zhang Chulan, Under One Person World.
"But we've already come this far, if we waver now... wouldn't everything he did before be meaningless?" So what if he was reincarnated as a spider? Spider Child.
"Meaning cannot be judged solely on one point. Obito challenged the corrupt ninja system for the sake of the girl in his heart, but in front of this big boss, the Allied Shinobi Forces eliminated their previous barriers and hatred, and under the guidance of Naruto and Hashirama's memories, they united their strength into one." Yu Wenzhou, The King's Avatar World.
"Who can say that the ninja world won't be heading towards a better future?" - Yu Wenzhou, The King's Avatar world.
Naruto, Sasuke, and Obito simultaneously decide to strike again to determine the victor!
[Obito simultaneously forged the Spear of Ama-no-Numa and the Shield of Ama-no-Numa using the Truth-Seeking Balls! The Spear of Ama-no-Numa is the Sage's Heart Sword, its power entirely dependent on the user's inner conviction.]
Naruto, on the other hand, joined forces with Sasuke to use the Armored Susanoo, further enhancing their combined power.
[And he summoned his companions; the nine Konoha Twelve leaped into the Nine-Tails' tail and took control of the Rasengan within.]
【"boom!"】
In the fierce collision, the Rasengan's bombardment combined with Naruto and Sasuke's attacks successfully shattered the Ama-no-Numa Shield!
[At the moment the Susanoo Sword and the Spear of Amazu clashed, Obito, looking at Naruto's resolute face, was momentarily stunned.]
If I had persisted a little longer, would the ending of the story have been different?
[Involuntarily, images of himself returning to Konoha, becoming a ninja, mourning Rin with Kakashi, fighting alongside Kakashi, and ultimately achieving his dream of becoming Hokage flashed through Obito's mind.]
"How could such a scene appear in my mind?"
【"Snapped!"】
The Sword of the Heart shattered because its master's will was weak...
[The Six Paths' bodies, pierced by the attack, could no longer contain the power of the Tailed Beasts. Resonating with the Tailed Beast chakra within Naruto, the power of the Tailed Beasts previously absorbed by the Ten-Tails uncontrollably spilled out!]
[With Gaara and Killer Bee's help, a long-awaited chakra tug-of-war ensues!]
[Let's begin!]
Chapter 93 Obito's Regret, Heretical Path, Samsara of Heaven and Earth Technique!
"Obito is still dreaming of becoming Hokage!" Xia Ling, in the world of Soul Street.
“I think I understand the difference between Naruto and Obito now. In Naruto’s memories, there are always people who help him and pull him back to the right path when he is in despair and grief. But Obito… from beginning to end, it seems like there is only one person.” Xia Ling, Soul Street World.
"His only friend killed his beloved with his own hands, his only teacher couldn't recognize his identity, Obito... he has no one to rely on anymore." Xia Ling, in the world of Soul Street.
"Therefore, in the struggle for control of the body with the Ten-Tails, Obito's part was never there from the beginning, because he had already given up on himself." Xia Ling, Soul Street World.
"It sounds pitiful, but it's a fact that he caused so much killing. He's a criminal, and that's a fact that can never be changed. He should be punished!" - Bruce Wayne, DC Universe.
"Sin is sin, pain is pain, sigh! If only Obito had met Naruto sooner, found himself sooner, and remembered his dream of becoming Hokage sooner!" —From the world of Home with Kids, Liu Xing.
"Obito's fate, the crisis of the ninja world—this is the tragedy of the times, and the tragedy of the ninja world." Yan Liuyuan, First Sequence World.
[The chakra tug-of-war had just begun when Naruto and Sasuke were already at a disadvantage, but as more and more people arrived to help, Obito began to struggle.]
[With the tailed beast's chakra leaving his body, he could no longer control the Divine Tree. Minato then used the Yin Nine-Tails' chakra as a grasping tool, transforming it into long chains that connected to every member of the Allied Shinobi Forces.]
As this chakra tug-of-war continued, Naruto and Obito met in the realm of consciousness.
The difference is that Naruto had the entire Allied Shinobi Forces standing behind him, while Obito had no one behind him...
"Did I actually... regret it?"
[The consciousness is more acutely aware of thought. Obito, watching Naruto and his companions, even gradually envisions himself becoming Hokage, smiling and caring for Naruto and the others alongside Kakashi.]